Neistovyy Undertaker
Posts : 10 Join date : 2012-12-08
Candy Candy Owned: 1
| Subject: Neistovyy (Knee-Stuh-Voy) Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:51 am | |
| - Spoiler:
Name: Neistovyy Nickname: Age: 23 Event Name: Smoke Classification: Undertaker. Personality: Neistovyy is a really chill guy but whatever he wants he will fight for and usually wins,He usually knows whats best for the situation but sometimes let fighting get in the way because it is his favorite thing to do.He is very cocky person but only if you start first.He is usually to himself tho although if someone is fake he will say something. He is the realest person you will ever meet...Although he's known to be a violent fighter, Neistovyy's actions tend to be for the best. Neistovyy lives for battle and enjoys a good fight more than anything. Neistovyy also strongly believes that fun comes before working. In every battle, he tries to get as much enjoyment out of it as possible.It seems that Neistovyy sometimes contradicts his own logic in fighting. On the one hand, Neistovyy wishes to increase his own personal power. On the other hand, he conceals his strength to enjoy a fight for as long as possible. In Neistovyy free time if he is not training, he is playing guitar or smoking marijuana and skateboarding. Likes/Dislikes: Likes: Fighting,Guitar,Smoking,marijuana,skateboarding, Women Dislikes: Fake people,seafood,Buzz Kills,Bitches Quirks: He is a very laid back guy but when he gets mad....oh boy is he mad, he will go crazy and destroy whatever pissed him off. He is a ladies man. Appearance: Ripped with tribal tattoos all over him. He has blonde hair. He wears a red hooded zip up jacket with cut off sleeves that is always open showing off his chest and abs. Neistovyy is a decent size, he is about 6'3" and weighs 175, he looks very freighting and always has a "eat shit" smirk on his face.He also looks like he is blood thirsty. Neistovyy is very muscular, his arms, torso, and legs rippling with strength. He always goes for tone, not bulk; in his experience, women find a man with toned, defined muscle more attractive than one who looks like a muscle-tank. He has a rather well-defined six-pack, of course. Neistovyy always carries himself with good posture; this, combined with his height and musculature, make him fairly intimidating. He's not necessarily scary to look at, but he's still got an imposing physical presence. Height:6'3" Weight:175 Special Characteristics: Tribal tattoos. Has a big dick and is a Ladies man. Abilities/Skills: Hand to hand: Neistovyy used to fight a lot as a kid, also his MMA record of 17-3 helps him, truly a hand to hand combat warrior. Swordsmanship: Neistovyy is a very skilled sword user as he has always had interest in them as a kid and has always had katanas and has trained many of days with them just because he thought the whole idea of swords are that cool. High Pain Tolerance: Neistovyy can pretty much take any amount of pain mainly because when someone attacks him or something happens to him, he is focused on killing that thing or person and not the pain, although Cold is his weakness. Blood Type: AB Ambitions/Dreams: Have a day that he can do everything he likes without anything he doesn't like coming up. Quote: Chief like a Indian. History: Neistovyy had just moved to Japan from Russia almost two weeks from when he was walking down the street high as usual, Neistovyy saw a very long bridge that connected to seem like a island, but not knowing where the bridge went, He decided to go home and grab his skateboard really quick before he walked to the other side of this bridge. As he was walking in his house he saw a blunt sitting on his table, of course he could not resist he smoked his blunt while skateboarding to the other side of the bridge. Then out of no where, there was a crack that Neistovyy did not see, so he face planted. While he was about to get up after screaming and yelling like a screamo band, he realized his blunt rolled over by a trashcan. Neistovyy being Neistovyy, of course he has to get it and smoke the rest of it. When he was walked over to pick the blunt up he saw a circular object that was upside down, then he moved the long black leather strap and grabbed the two smaller black leather straps that were on the inside of the shield and flipped it over. It had ying yang signs on it with potleafs as the eyes, of course Neistovyy decided to keep this new object he had found. After he finished his blunt, Neistovyy Put the shield in place on his back and skated down the rest off the bridge to get to what is called "Deadman Wonderland" He saw a big T.V that answered all his questions before he could even think about them, which was kinda cool because that means he didn't have to ask anyone and happen to encounter a buzz kill. But his thought of that was wrong, right when he was thinking that a little kid bumped in to him causing Neistovyy to instantly snap out of his deep thoughts and look at the little twerp who just made him do that. The little kid was a mean looking prick and didn't even apologize, but instead cried for his daddy to come save him because he was scared of Neistovyy. When the kids dad came running over to help, he shoved Neistovyy and that is when Neistovyy snapped, "I FUCKING HATE YOU LITTLE PRICKS!!!" As he said this, he took the new object he picked up and cut the dads head clean off with it, "Now for you, you little sack of shit" Neistovyy picked up the little kid and punted his ass seventeen feet away. "Anyone else want some, before I go back to my home to get some more weed because you fucks ruined my high?" A few tough guys ran at Neistovyy but they are no match for Neistovyy's shield and they all died immediately. "Next person to even look at me funny is going to get there balls cut off and shoved down their throat so they die from having their own balls in their throat" Starting to skate away, Neistovyy realized that the shield never got dull or even sent any shock to his left arm which he was holding it on. That's when the po-po came and tazed the fuck out of Neistovyy and took him to jail. When Neistovyy awoke, he was still on this island. Except for being a visitor like before he was now a prisoner. As Neistovyy was being instructed on how the prison works the person giving him the information was interrupted by a officer and pulled aside and asked if he even regretted killing all of them people, when replying "No, they pissed me off they deserved it" The officer immediately asked him to be an undertaker and was told the benefits of being a undertaker compared to a prisoner. All Neistovyy cared about was the fact he could still skateboard and smoke weed, so he accepted the job as undertaker and this is where Neistovyy is today, still being the old pothead and skateboarder he used to be, but ordered to stay inside of DMW. Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjOwTKD5QN8RP Sample: - Spoiler:
Yasen was born. During this time, he was in a era of peace, but he never had a clue why he saw dead people all the time, and why no one else could see him well atleast that is what it seemed like, everyone was so careless for him. He wondered what made him a special person. He lived a normal kids life, other than the random anger spree's he would go on. But when he was 15, this "peace" that was going on around came to a sudden stop. The rate of people trying to hurt him and deaths of normal citizens rose greatly at a alarming rate. Soon , all hell broke loose, as he saw massive battles between the Pirates and other just normal people. He had no idea what he was seeing, but he saw the battles, and the death that took place. But his destiny was coming.
One stormy night, Yasen was late coming home, but this would be the last time he'd leave home, in the night, the storm had approached. He was in the middle of another huge battle between the the pirates and the citizens this time, and he tried to take cover. He wondered in fear what was going on around him. He saw the fight unfold, until a Citizen went up to him and told him to get away from there in fear. But then the words by an pirate were uttered, the words that would change Yasen's life forever.
Yasen was kidnapped by the Pirates. He became a slave now, and he was shocked at what happened. His life had just changed dramatically, but a new life was just born. He was scared of himself, His anger sometimes caused outbreaks of violence which worried his brother.His brother was also captured the same night, When the battle was over there was a total of 5 prisoners, Yasen, His brother Nero and three other teens. Yasen who was 15, his brother who was 14 and the other kids Yasen had never saw before...he wondered who they were but he was scared into silence.
He was then put on to a boat, rather large boat but Yasen as well as the four other prisoners where shoved in a room that was rather small, it had five beds and enough space to be able to walk without bumping into something but that was it.Yasen had no idea what was going to happen or when something was going to happen and he remained silent for the rest of the night.Yasen couldn't see the other boys but he could hear them crying and greiving. Yasen whispered to his little brother to go to sleep and then he laid down and went to sleep, he was awoke by a loud bang and he jumped up and two of the boys was missing so now it was just Yasen, His brother and one other boy. After about five minutes there was a knock on the door and a pirate told everyone to go to a chest in the back of the room and grab a wooden sword and come out on the deck.
That day is the day Yasen was told he was very advanced for his age and the day he realized that he was going to have to fight for his freedom.The Pirates treated them pretty decent, gave them plenty of food and even gave them gifts at times.Yasen's brother Nero was the first to recieve a gift. He got a brand new pair of shoes because he had none when he was captured. Vuclan got the second gift, it was a guitar. He got it for beating the cook of the ship in a sword duel, Of course they were only using wooden swords but Yasen had been practicing hard, and with a real sword.It has been six months since the day they were captured, and Yasen had been training non stop getting stronger everyday, he can even keep up with most of the Pirates in duels. But that did not give him his freedom yet. The non stop training and life of a pirate coninued on for a whole year and six months before the captain of the ship offered Yasen a spot on the crew, but the captain did no invite Yasen's brother Nero on the crew so Yasen refused and was punished by having to take on three of the crew members at once, while the crew members had wooden swords and Yasen had nothing but his fists. Yasen needless to say beat the shit out of the three crew members bad enough where the captain respected him and gave his brother a spot on the crew as well.
Within the next month Yasen fought his first battle for the pirates, with a huge victory for the pirates they got a new ship and loads of money.Yasen's life style was work hard play hard. He trained everyday from noon to 4pm and played his guitar from 7pm to 11pm he had been doing that every night since he got the guitar except now he is actually pretty talented at playing it and can learn songs fairly fast.This continued on until right around the two year mark. Nero was very unhappy with the pirate life and one battle decided to just give up on fighting, he ran into the middle of the battle field and just gave up. He was killed within three minutes of the battle and Yasen saw his own little brother get decapitated right in front of him. Yasen was so shocked he couldn't even process it for a while...but when he did, Yasen went on a full out rage killing everyone and everything in site. He destroyed the whole town and burned it down. He was so pissed he did not speak for a whole month at least to anyone, not even the captain of the ship.He nearly starved to death several times and didn't train for a while all he did was sit in his room and play his guitar. One day he went through his brothers things and found a sack of marijuana and decided to smoke it. Thats when Yasen realized that it has been far to long since he has had his freedom and was tired of fighting for these morons. The next battle happened about four months later when Yasen then decided to sneak his things off the ship and put it on another ship, a small little vessel with enough room to fit two people on it comfortably. The pirates won that battle and left the town poor and in terrible condition. Yasen helped rebuild the town and helped with training the local militia. While at night he would go to the town square and play his guitar for entertainment to the town.Yasen was 19 years of age when he snuck off the pirate ship, a whole four years of nothing but playing guitar smoking marijuana and fighting.Thats when Yasen decided to pick up a new hobbie, Skateboarding...He was naturally good with a skateboard, he could ollie within the first two hours of getting on a board and could kickflip within two days, now he impressed everyone because he could fight amazingly, Play guitar godly and skateboard like a pro, This is where Yasen is today, he has nothing to do but live life to the fullest.
Last edited by Neistovyy on Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:06 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
|
Manako Deadman
Posts : 43 Join date : 2012-12-05 Age : 26 Location : Canada, ON
Candy Candy Owned: 1
| Subject: Re: Neistovyy (Knee-Stuh-Voy) Mon Dec 10, 2012 8:42 am | |
| Most of your application made me chuckle like a silly woman like I am - although, add some more description in these sections: Appearance, and personality.
Looks good so far! | |
|
Kitaro
Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-12-06
Candy Candy Owned: 1
| Subject: Re: Neistovyy (Knee-Stuh-Voy) Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:59 pm | |
| Missing 314 personality words, 154 appearance words, and 68 on history which isn't so bad. I can deal with 68 missing. But you are also missing the rp sample which is required for an undertaker rank. ALSO the rest is surprisingly fine. | |
|
Kitaro
Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-12-06
Candy Candy Owned: 1
| Subject: Re: Neistovyy (Knee-Stuh-Voy) Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:07 pm | |
| Alright non elite position of Undertaker with a sub par app is 'acceptable' loosely so approved. | |
|